by Holland Elise Wieber
Rain, I love to watch
the drops of you fall down
and I love you but I
think I have had enough
of sitting out in the rain
Rain, don't bother me
though your rainbows
are so beautiful...wait--
I think I have a better idea.
What if you stayed?
How about rainbows
everywhere in a circle
around the whole world
so everyone can see it.
So how about that, Mr. Rain?
11 comments:
I really enjoyed the development of feelings in this poem, from not wanting the rain to accepting it and asking the circumstance to serve a great purpose. Fantastic poem!!!!
I Love these! I am so impressed that Holland did these. Talented! Blessings, Jenn B
Holland you are beautiful inside and out and it shows even more in your writing! Thank you for letting your mom share this with us!
Holland you are beautiful inside and out and it shows even more in your writing! Thank you for letting your mom share this with us!
Holland you are beautiful inside and out and it shows even more in your writing! Thank you for letting your mom share this with us!
Holland you are beautiful inside and out and it shows even more in your writing! Thank you for letting your mom share this with us!
Love it Holland! How old are you? Nice. -adam j
Made me smile inside and out. Thank you for sharing your talent!! Janelle
That is wonderful Holland! you are a great poet! :)
Holland, you have words that speak so much! You always have! God has given you a gift and I am praying that HE shows you exactly how you are to use it for HIS glory! I love you so very much you sweet snuggly cutie pie!!! I can't wait to show this to Mary and Kaneda tomorrow!!
"I love your poem Holland!" Love, Mary
"You're such a good writer! I can't wait to hear more! Love you!" Kaneda
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